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Original Article Passage on DailyBeast by Allen Guelzo (Civil War professor)

“It is on Lincoln himself that the most demanding historical exactness is fitted. And Day-Lewis wears it uncommonly well. His reedy-pitched voice reflects the numerous descriptions of Lincoln’s voice which described it as a tenor, with almost squeaky accents. He walks flat-footedly, as Lincoln did, wraps himself in a shawl, features only a tuft of beard at his chin (the luxuriant chin-whiskers of his early presidency had been shaved-down by the time of the movie’s events, in 1865), and quotes Shakespeare between off-color stories.”

 Paraphrase

Day-Lewis exceptionally portrays Lincoln’s unique and significant roles in history. The many physical similarities that he possessed, such as his delicate, tenor voice, flat-footed walk, signature shawl, ruff beard, and common shakespeare quoted fables, played a great part in this intricate representation.
Revised Paraphrase

Lincoln's unique role in history is portrayed exceptionally well by Day-Lewis, providing an intense and wonderful character to follow throughout the film. The actor's piercing speech allows for a proficient representation of Lincoln's commonly narrated high voice. Day-Lewis's "flat-footed walk", again shows tremendous resemblance to Lincoln while being wrapped in a signature small blanket as well. The actor remains with only a short, stubble of a shadow, had Lincoln's common lavish beard been replaced by this time in his presidential story during 1865. Day-Lewis again comes through radiating such exquisite likeness to Lincoln with his often indelicate stories between shakespeare fables.

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